Can't get enough
Så nu tänkte jag lägga upp en sprilans ny dikt som jag precis skrivit klart. Det var ett tag sen jag la upp en dikt på sidan och förhuvudtaget skrev en dikt. Men här kommer den i alla fall, plus den är på engelska så ursäkta för felen
When I heard you sing for the first time
Do you know what I did?
I fell for you
When I saw your face for the first time
Do you know what I did?
I fell for you immediately
And I have never stopped loving you
'cause a life without you dosen't work
And believe me
I' ve tried
But only for one day
And I were going crazy
I'm going crazy when I dosen't hear you sing
I'm going crazy when I can't see you
And I'm going crazy when I dosen't think about you
But that will never happen
'cause you're in my thoughts 24 hours every day
You're the reason for that I can breath
You're the reason for that I can see
You're the reason for that I'm still alive
And I can't get enough of you
'cause I'll love you to the end of time
No one can never change that
No matter how hard they try
'cause I can't get enough
bra dikt, du skulle kunna skrapa lite extra på engelskan så blir dikten ännu bättre. Som skriv don't istället för doesn't och i den här versen You're the reason for that I can breath ser bättre och låter bättre om den skrivs såhär.
You're the reason i can breathe.
You're the reason I can see
You're the reason that I'm still alive.
Annars såg jag inget mer fel, bra skrivet. :)
Jätte fint!